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January 19, 2009

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Alex V. Cook

The girl works at the coffee shop, and the narrator nurses the idea that the girl loves him because she is always nice to him and knows his order, even though in his heart he realizes that it is her job to be nice to him and know his order because that's how coffee shops get schleps like himself to come in every day and spend that much on coffee.

The middle section could be when he encounters her at a bar or some public place and tries to strike up a conversation and she doesn't know who he is (being out of context) and even when she does, she kinda blows him off to talk to her friends. needless to say, his heart is broken

ending: he goes into the coffee shop after staying away a week and she says, I'm so sorry I didn't recognize you the other night yadda yadda and the spell is once again cast

Calvin

Well, Alex, I think this baby's all yours. That is precisely what my pop gem will be about. I think it's a great plot, very pop-gemmy.

Into the lab I go. I think I already have a title.

Alicia

Maybe he notices the girl because she's wearing a raspberry-colored beret.

OR, maybe...it's...that...he....

is................................

Gonna have to get back to you on this one.

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